May 6, 2011 10:15:09 AM PDT
I think you're moving in the right direction, but I would stress to be careful about putting stylized, "cartoony" (for a lack of a better word) faces/elements in with the observational drawing stuff. From what I've heard, they really don't like to see that. If you're going to do it, probably keep it in the supplementary section. Again, though, I've heard conflicting stuff from people about what they like to see.